Classic and Contemporary Poetry
MY FATHER'S FACE, by HAYDEN CARRUTH Poet Analysis Poet's Biography First Line: Old he was but not yet wax Last Line: This man not Subject(s): Blake, William (1757-1827); Fathers | ||||||||
Old he was but not yet wax, old and old but not yet gray. What an awkwardness of facts gray and waxen when he lay. Rage had held me forty years, only five have sought his grace. Will my disproportionate tears quell at last his smiling face? Awkwardly at his behest I this queer rhyme try to make after one that he loved best made long since by Willy Blake. * * * Cannot. In my own way, half inarticulate, must sing the blues. Oh how he lay there quiet as cast dice, crooked. They had given him a face he never wore smiling like anyone, like God -- he, my own, who had smiled only in the smear of pain, as now my hemlock smears in this wind dripping with half-snow, half-rain. Smoke flares from my stovepipe, breaks sharply down, away, blue, whipping the leafless alders, vanishing, while I watch from my window, this shack in a scrap of meadow going to woods -- alder, chokecherry, yellow birch, ash, and the one old hemlock leaning forth, smeared in half-snow, half-rain, November and the north. * * * Southward, downcountry was where he lay and I stood in a loathsome mass of bleeding flowers that April. Sun flashed and was gone, cold. We two there, lashed stiff in old antagonism, yet altered. It was that new smile fingered on him, official, patented, like the oil that shone on the pale oak catafalque: such means they use to publicize, to promote a marketable death. He was worthy, worth! -- I blurted, tried to blurt in the clench of a surprise of tears. And then my anger shifted from him to them. In that horror of hurting flowers where I stood and he lay I, frozen, was turned around inside my years as a shadow turns inside the changing day. * * * Why couldn't they let him be himself? Like all our family he smiled with a downturned mouth. No doubt professional death-tenders are required, competence is required, yet I wish they had let him lie as he had fallen, old Darwinist smiling at the light gone down in the south, at the leaf gone down. Strangely, the birds had come. Already in cold twilight robins sang, and he heard them, the simple but rich song, like Blake's, melodious for a fair season to come, he heard them and he fell down, unable to last till summer. It was a reversal. At the wrong time, in April, light dwindled and the leaf fell down. But hearts burst any time. He took it smiling with a downturned mouth. * * * The old Socialist! And his father before him. Era of eyeshades, rolltops, late tracks in a snowy street, a flare of shots maybe in the dark, and the talk, talk: that man eating, this man not. It was all so blessedly simple. Hate, hate the monopolists! Ah, and have I not, sirrah? -- but power of money has bought the power of heart, monopoly eats the word, eats thought, desire, your old companions now in the thick of it, eating -- is that betrayal? They fatten, but for my part old hatred deepens, deepening as monopoly deepens, until my socialism has driven me to the sociality of trees, snow, rocks, the north -- solitude. Strange outcome. Like so many. I'll walk now; the woody meadow, the firs, the brook, then higher to the birches. I wish you were coming too. * * * "Alyosha left his father's house feeling more depressed and crushed in spirit than when he entered it . . ." I walk, going at last nowhere in the snow and rain that lock in air and nap the gray rock with gray fur. Beside me, among the ferns that confide their green trust to the snow, something stalks, or seems to stalk. A partridge? Or my mind's shadow? Minute fires flow in the lichened rock, and a yellow eye blinks like a shuttered lens among the ferns. Shadows and strange fires, who can deny them, aspects of the cold world and the father's house? We rebel backward, ever backward, going behind the ancestral impositions of reality. To seek, to find -- not to impose. So we say. But it is a sad business. * * * Once he brought to his blue house in the guttering chestnut forest -- oh, I remember this -- a pomegranate in his pocket. But let me describe to you a killed chestnut tree. Leaves, fruit, even the bark have long fallen to the dark alien disease, and at last the tree itself lies down in a twisted, rising-and-falling shape, and it never rots. The smooth wood, pale and intense, undulates in a kind of serpentine passivity among waves of witch hazel and dogwood that wash along it summer after summer after summer. And so the killed chestnut has become something everlasting in the woods, like Yggdrasill. Tradition is not convention. Tradition is always unexpected, like the taste of the pomegranate, so sweet. * * * I must complete my turning. With purpose, very coolly, I raise my vision, snipping a thread of the net that holds everything together. My splashing fears subside about my knees. How easy! I wonder why I took so long, learning that to destroy what could never be either right or wrong, this net, this mere order or any order, is no real destruction -- look, I walk as I have always walked, one foot in front of the other foot. The rocks and birches take so warmly to the purity of their restoration. I see this. I have done it with one gesture, like that. I walk in the tact of the ultimate rebel graduated from conspiracy, free, truly free, in the wonder of uncreation. * * * Well, the traditions of woods are sweet, but something is withheld, something . . . O my father, where is the real monopolist? Can I, alien, avoid spreading my dark disease? But you would say then, seek its purity, deep at the root, radically. If the orderly massacre of order creates an order, then let it be new, even now, from the beginnings of things. I am cold to my bones, my red hand clings like a wind-plastered leaf to a white bole of birch, the sky is speckled with snow-flecks driven downwind, vanishing. It is all a song vanishing down the wind, like snow, like the last leaves of the birch spinning away in harsh beauty. The hardhack, clotted with snow, bends and rattles, a sound like jeering in the driven twilight. Why must the song be so intricate? What am I now, what is my sorrow, has it not spun away? Your face, snow-flecked, seems torn downwind like the song of birch leaves. * * * Confused darkness turns a page. Wind slackens, cold night is beginning, in the last light the god of winter walks, gray and alone, Odin, Windigo, St. Malachy, someone with a downturned smile brushing the fir boughs, shaking the dead reeds and ferns. Snow thickens, leaning toward the south. Could he come home tonight to his house, his woods, the snow, the snow-light? My thought sings into snow, vanishing. At least I have two clear choices: to stamp in deepening cold, half-blind, dragging my feet in freezing ferns, determining my way in darkness, to the ragged meadow, the shack with the rusty stove; or to stay where I am in the rustle of snow while my beard clots and whitens and the world recedes into old purity and the snow opens at last to the stars that will glisten like silent histories breaking over a silent face, smiling and cold. * * * O thou quiet northern snow reaching southward wave on wave, southward to the land below, billow gently on his grave. Snowy owl that glides alone, softly go, defend his rest; buntings, whirl around his stone softly, thou the wintriest. Gently, softly, o my kind, snow and wind and driven leaf, take him, teach my rebel mind trust at last in this cold grief. Used with the permission of Copper Canyon Press, P.O. 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